Voted For: Stanza

Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,
Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,
Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,
"My internet was down, I ain't duck you," i've had enough of lies,
If the connection was down then why did your stats say other wise,*
O.G. don't talk about em' Drop an album, its still on the shelves,
Only way you makin the crowd 'clap' is if their killin themselves...


2 Many Played Concepts Dawg, Not Enough Hard Hittin Punz, I Lyked Da Wordplay 4 Da Most Part, But Few Linez Wuzza Lil Played, & U Had Less 2 Offer In Da Form Ov Personals

Best Line=
Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,

Worst=
Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,

1st Line Wuz Meaningless & Da Second Line Iz Played 2 Fuck, Seemed Lyke Force Nameplay 2 Me


Im One Step away from Goin Beyond Your Lyrical Status
If wackness Came In Pounds We Know Youd be the fatest
Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic"
This dude is Scared Stiff So ill Bury His Body 6 Feet deep
He Gonna Regamortis & Choke up as if he was battling me
Yeah Last Time I No showed So now Im Bout to come back
This Dude Supplies Less Punchez Than a "Paraplegic" Match

Good Verse, U Had Better Nameplay Than OneStepBeyond, A Few Decent Ideaz Also, Flow Seemed More Complex & Original Than OneStepBeyonds, Punz Were Not Anythin Special, Sum Hit Tho, Wordplay Wuz Iight & You Had A Few Pretty Decent Personalz, Ya Verse Wuz Da Mo' Enjoyable Read.

Vote=Stanza, Better All Round Verse Wid More Fluency & Consistancy In Da Flow & Disses

Return Da Vote In Mah Signature [or dis vote will be removed]

Good Job Both, Keep It Up, Pz Out


Crew vote removed.. looks as if Khaoz was posting in TBN up till 5/29

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