Voted For: CeleriTy

alrite man let me break this down...

Celerity- your font was really hard to read.. and most of ur punches were multi-use.. but your flow stayed on the whole way thru.. and the structure was alright.

Jooksta- you really need to work on writing harder hitting punches. you had some but they were really basic and they werent anything that really caught the eye. your structure was the most annoying thing i have ever read.. but beside that decent for a beginner.

Vote. Celerity for harder hitting punches and an easier to read structure.. no hate.. elevate

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