DAMN...Deep stuff right here. It's obvious that tha strongest part of this piece is the emotion. You made me understand your feelings and how strongly you felt. This was a refreshing piece.

Overall 10/10

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When my baby was born and I stared into its eyes, I did nothing but cry
Cried: oceans of tears that raged across landscapes and watered soil
Created fertility from a soul baron, Gave life in its passing to a new man


RTF on tha poem in my link...please