Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

dizzee rascal- i liked da wordplay n punches and personals throughout ya verse. Da shit wuz real nice, i wuz feelin da way u cam ehard tah hit ya opponent wit hard punches n terrific wordplay. ur struture wuz iight but i aint like how u crammed 2 many lyrics in 1 line. Try tah make da shit flo a lil bit mo smoothly. work on dat. yo vocab wuz str8 jus try ta expand it doe so u can use mo wordz tah get at yo opponent. Great verse mayne lotz o good shit jus keep elevatin but 4 a newb good shit

fav line:Comprend? fucking with '2 9'S' Fiend think you know thats 'mean'
My personia gleems, where as like 'muslim fantasies' ill 'blow up your dreams'
^^^really feelin dat shit good ass job homie

8.5/10


accomplish- som lines were wack as shit. ur opener wuz pretty weak n i wuznt really feelin it. u need tah elevate sum mo n com wit harder punches n shit. please enhance ya vocab nicah, errthing wuz pretty wack so mos def keep elevatin alot b/c u didnt com real hard.
4/10

no fav line

punches-DR
personals-DR
opener-DR
closure-DR
whole verse-DR
my v/DR 4 comin harder n b/c he murked accomplish
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