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Old 06-01-05, 05:29 PM   #53
Dizzee Rascal
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Posts: 754
This was feedback posted for Esco

IP:

i could tell this would be a good battle but i wonder why he risks it(1)
he's prolly hope'n the votas'll ride his bitch ass like sea biscut(2)

Lol but not a great punch to open with

see esco i can hurt physically but i'll leave mentality scars(3)
but with a flow like Fort Knots you aint stealin my bars(4)

Ight ok

look if you have heat jus leave it wit you cuz i kno im keepin a pistol(5)
favorite clips a magazine your body jus subscribe'd to the issue(6)

Str8

leave you bleedin from open tissue you thinkin im jokin wit you(7)
bitch im bout to give you an L like i was smokin wit you(8)

No man played

now you cant bust a pimple but claim you poppin dem thangs(9)
phew i'll have you killed in 7 days like you was watchin the rang(The Ring movie)(10)

Not v.good to be honest man

YOU VERSE ME; is like raging bulls to a matador, ya raps a bore...(11)
Get laid out thinkin U slick wit all them metaphors(12)

2nd line - wack but build up was dope

U typin with no flow, kinda like a drippin faucet... (13)
must got A.D.D...cuz i paid attention to ur rhyme, but lost it(14)

lol nice

I’m dissing you're weak raps, ya fag style n ya queer hooks(15)
Cuz u'll 'never be signed' like some 'retarded kids yearbooks'(16)

ha ight

Are you listening to me....call me Qtip....I'm clearin out these "wacks" (wax),(17)
Get ready...this is the message I'm sending you,525-7689, did u get the "fax",(facts)(18)

Played

Fuck it ima finish u off easy nice n slow(19)
esco got murked wurse den 5 clips 2 his dome(20)

Filler

VS

How r you a ''Mastamind''?.. you aint even masterd ya own Mind
split personality? wit them raps we're sure your a Lil Wayne Mime

Lol Ok personal

Fuck'a rhyme, he handles his voters like O.J....Usin Blackmail
Reppin Ghost town?......kid, steppin ta me i'll spook-ya-pale

Decent bit simple though

lets rate rhymes on a scale, hence why your a LightWeight
Even british emcees sit an tell you...''Oi, you aint tight, mate!''

Weak

We all dont mean ta Hate, but i'm simply .........voicing Facts
an this trick thinks ''flippin'' a skript mean handstands an Akrobats

Dooope

layed out on his Back, its broken, but at least ya think your not Whack!
when in all reality, niggas get more quality from a 5 dollar Sac

Ok

while your credabilities still in-tact, u still have Chance ta Log Out
Faggot sat 'n told me he's a Milf...then asked ''whats that all about?!''

lol lol

dude actually thought it meant .......''Merkin Is 'Lyricals' fun''
like umm are u so stupid ya think i'd actually give u Propps? son!

Ok again

I wont lie, i got my hand on a gun while you cluth ya Ring Peice
fuck Livin Legendz, dudes idea of ''FAMILY'' fun is fuckin his Neice

I know im in LL but hahahaha

if lyrics were a Leece, you'd be about 5 months OverDue
my pockets would be so big from your late payments.....
people would be like ''woah! happy ta see me, arent you?''

decent

but yo I'm Thru, your whored, now back ta the Red Light District..
Oh, we still waitin for your verse?.........I Thought I Missed-It

Str8 way to finish

Ok told to vote on this but not got 100v so ima leave the detailed feed instead ppl
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