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Old 06-01-05, 07:06 PM   #54
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Voted For: Esco

Vote Teph:

How r you a ''Mastamind''?.. you aint even masterd ya own Mind
split personality? wit them raps we're sure your a Lil Wayne Mime
Fuck'a rhyme, he handles his voters like O.J....Usin Blackmail
Reppin Ghost town?......kid, steppin ta me i'll spook-ya-pale

5/5 Hot line, specially the OJ.

lets rate rhymes on a scale, hence why your a LightWeight
Even british emcees sit an tell you...''Oi, you aint tight, mate!''
We all dont mean ta Hate, but i'm simply .........voicing Facts
an this trick thinks ''flippin'' a skript mean handstands an Akrobats

5/5 again hot, the thing cracked me up was the British shit

layed out on his Back, its broken, but at least ya think your not Whack!
when in all reality, niggas get more quality from a 5 dollar Sac
while your credabilities still in-tact, u still have Chance ta Log Out
Faggot sat 'n told me he's a Milf...then asked ''whats that all about?!''

2/5, not really feelin this one

dude actually thought it meant .......''Merkin Is 'Lyricals' fun''
like umm are u so stupid ya think i'd actually give u Propps? son!
I wont lie, i got my hand on a gun while you cluth ya Ring Peice
fuck Livin Legendz, dudes idea of ''FAMILY'' fun is fuckin his Neice

3/5 Nice diss here, specially the neice bit, you had me crackin

if lyrics were a Leece, you'd be about 5 months OverDue
my pockets would be so big from your late payments.....
people would be like ''woah! happy ta see me, arent you?''
but yo I'm Thru, your whored, now back ta the Red Light District..
Oh, we still waitin for your verse?.........I Thought I Missed-It

Hahaha, nice one 4/5

19/25 - good drop. I liked this because it kept me laughin and punches were hard.

i could tell this would be a good battle but i wonder why he risks it(1)
he's prolly hope'n the votas'll ride his bitch ass like sea biscut(2)
see esco i can hurt physically but i'll leave mentality scars(3)
but with a flow like Fort Knots you aint stealin my bars(4)

5/5, this was sick, hit em hard, great way to open

look if you have heat jus leave it wit you cuz i kno im keepin a pistol(5)
favorite clips a magazine your body jus subscribe'd to the issue(6)
leave you bleedin from open tissue you thinkin im jokin wit you(7)
bitch im bout to give you an L like i was smokin wit you(8)

2/5 Sorry homie wasnt feelin this

now you cant bust a pimple but claim you poppin dem thangs(9)
phew i'll have you killed in 7 days like you was watchin the rang(The Ring movie)(10)
YOU VERSE ME; is like raging bulls to a matador, ya raps a bore...(11)
Get laid out thinkin U slick wit all them metaphors(12)
U typin with no flow, kinda like a drippin faucet... (13)

3/5, like the ring movie bit and the last two lines are hot

must got A.D.D...cuz i paid attention to ur rhyme, but lost it(14)
I’m dissing you're weak raps, ya fag style n ya queer hooks(15)
Cuz u'll 'never be signed' like some 'retarded kids yearbooks'(16)
Are you listening to me....call me Qtip....I'm clearin out these "wacks" (wax),(17)

4/5, perfect bit but I didnt really feel the last line

Get ready...this is the message I'm sending you,525-7689, did u get the "fax",(facts)(18)
Fuck it ima finish u off easy nice n slow(19)
esco got murked wurse den 5 clips 2 his dome(20)

3/5, nice ending,

16/25, this was pretty good but the thing is tht u jus missed out, teph played well and dissed harder than you, ure disses were tight but his were better. I spent a long time doin this feedback can yall RTF on my battle with Big_dawg, link in sig
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