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Old 06-01-05, 08:08 PM   #21
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Lyrics Put MCs On Atkin's Diet!
 
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Voted For: PreZidict

Aeyo Imma Vote On This Shit...Been Up 4 A While LOL...I Know How You Niggaz Feel

Hoodz_1:

Yo i can cap ya best so u better go to " Lidz "
And the reason u tight cause u slip ya dick in little kids
Nice 2nd Line....Nothin Serious Tho....5/10
Am i hurting ya feeling fell the injections of these lyrics
I put a ghost on my punch's so when i throw u fear it
Dat Was Soft...5/10
Yea i stay in the rap biz for life and i allways stay on topic*
I put the heater to ya ass so u can accually drop some " Hot Shit"
Heard Dis Line Before....Old....4.5/10
And im the kind of dude not to fuck wit without gettin hit
And i just spit so hott its like puttin a condom on ya body its ripped
Nah...Not Hard Enough...5/10
No more explination i won this like the Heat vs the damn nets
You a fan of my raps im J.O im leavein you fuckin fan-recked*
Dat Was Aight Fam....5.5/10

Ya Verse Was On Point Jus Didnt Hit Hard Wit Ya Punches Or Creativity....You Didnt Use Much Wordplay So Cant Comment On That

Prezidict:

dis reject thought passin a tree meant drivin by woods
cuz he like shirts in da summa..white n come wit no hood!
Real Nice Both Lines Were Good...7/10
fuck a bullet, my verse'll "lay urs down" like smooth talkers*
hood not old but his lines "senile" n need a permanate walker!**
Again Nice Lines....7.5/10
metal u neva heard of, listen O.J. i'll smother u wit gloves
in battles u specialize in losses..hood rarely wins 1***
Nah Not Really Dat Nice...5/10
put da scope in ya mouth..u'll gargle like i'm cleanin ya gums!
heard ya sex life sucks, hood couldnt bust wit a bubble 4 cum!
That Was Aight Nothin Serious Tho...6/10
hood u ain't winnin ya votes dead while mines alive
ur text records ya job??..no wonda u here from "9 to 5"****
Best Line Outta Ya Shit, Good Personal....8/10

OPENER: Prezidict
MIDDLE: Prezidict
CLOSER: Prezidict

That Opener & Closer Took It...Both Need Work On Structure...Wordplay Was Tight In Prezidict's Shit...Hoods Try Harder Punches Fam....RTF Nukkaz

..$cream At Me..
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