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Old 06-01-05, 10:26 PM   #8
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Voted For: Young Dollar

Aiight, a one-sided battle here.

Dollar, your verse was nice man. Punches were creative and actually hit. Wordplay was nice, and personals were pretty decent. Everything flowed well, and your structure was fine. Nice drop

SNE, you didnt really have any punches, just a bunch of shit thrown together. No wordplay or personals either. Try to elevate on your creativity and your consistency with your punches.

V/ Young Dollar
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