-The Shogun of the Dark-
From: BADMANchester, england |
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Voted For: Daubs
Puncture your lungs like a board with a dart....
Blowjob before the battle?
Thats the only way you gonna have a head start!!
//nice intro, funnny and a goood swipe
This fools a coin so ima leave this hoe spun...
Skippin over gats?
Just proves to us.......that you jump the gun!!
//like the delivery, smooth flow, nice
Not been KO'ed? Well ima have to make the first..
If ya girl was a sphere..
You still wouldn't manage to get a "round herr"!!
//quite weak in relation to the rest depends how u flow it but it reads a lil messy 2 me, not the best finisher i've heard from you though daubs. no hate
and kaos:
''UK Stand Up''...Be Counted, & Get Yo ''Arse'' Slain By Da Minority!
U Culd Have Cartman Reppin England & Nobodiez ''Respectin Yo Authority''
//another nice intro, good shit kaos
Sorry-Bee, Yo Rhymez R ''Evicted'' U Can Now Go Home
It Aint Only Winz We Stealin Frum U, Itz Ya PHONE!!**
//personal, good 7/10, but ive heard you hit harder
Hand Daubs A ''Bone'' Diz Dawg Choked & Forgot 2 Chew
Dat Diss 2 TBN, U Wuz Lame...
Gave Uz A Bad Name, Cuz U Came Whacker Than They Krew!
//another so-so finisher. but again no hate max luv 2 both my boyz
i can appreciate that this was a quick battle between friends and both your flows were more casual than your usuals, i personally think anyways. but i have to give the win to daubs for better structure, and better puns
kaos you battled well and there wasn't much in it, if you tidy up your structure a bit you can be a big force in this RV game, both of y'all keep uppin, thug luv 2 all
arch out
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