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Old 06-02-05, 08:18 AM   #24
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Good Battle Both

Babylon=
Nyce Verse, Opening Few Bars Didnt Really Hit Hard, But Frum Da ''Mid Summers Night'' Lyne Onwards, Ya Verse Started 2 Pick Up. Nice Wordplay Thruout, Da First 2 Bars I Didnt Really Feel Had Much Ov An Effect. Last 4 Lines Were Nyce, Good Personals & Creative Punch, If Only U Kept Dat Consistancy In Ya Whole Verse, Ya Openin 2 Bars Really Let U Down 29/50

Marvjay1009=
Real NiceWordplay Thru Ya Whole Verse, Dat ''Nicky & Kim'' Lyne Wuz Pretty Decent Dawg, Nuthin 2 pPersonal In Ya' Verse, But Da Dope Punz & Nice Wordplay In Nearly Every Line Getz U Da Vote, Wuznt Feeling Yo' Closer, But Everythin Else Wuz Consistant, Creative & Had An Effect On Da Outcome Ov Da Battle 43/50


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