Voted For: MaRVJay1009

marv took this easily.

bone: your verse was waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to stretched, and your punches were too basic; so much in your lines, yet you had horrible punhces, poor personals that didn't hit at all, nothing really stood out, everything was pretty weak man, mainly because your lines dragged out too much, do something about that, then maybe you have a shot.

marv: you came with some awesome lines man, great wordplay, and hard hitting punches....flow and structure were on point as well. overall, you totally annhilated this guy, i especially like the 'bone in the ground' line, that was funny as well as hard hitting....very creative in this, cleary you outmatched your opponent, and easily took this, keep up.

v/marvjay...rtf, or i will get this removed

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