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Old 06-02-05, 02:32 PM   #9
Dizzee Rascal
Middle Weight
 
Posts: 754
This was feedback posted for White Powder

IP:

*Leaves detailed feed for both since it wont let me vote*

you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence...
Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance..

Bit of filler really an ok way to open

Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments...
Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments...

Safe

I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you..
Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you..

Nice rhyme scheme was poor on account of you n you but who carse, the punch hit

Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already...
4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..**

Nice

Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry..
Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.***

Nice personal

VS

Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray
Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays

Nice

U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows
Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes

Decent needed re-wording though

U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G
Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's

Dope

U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers
Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers

meh

Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True
Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu...

^^ This is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to forced you cant just take two random letters from his name and use it for a personal this was wack

Hard to vote, Blaze definetly had the nicest punch of the battle but the last two bars, just fell of where has WP was consistant fru out which won it for him
Please return the unbiased favour on the battle in my sig plllease
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