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Old 06-02-05, 04:24 PM   #12
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Voted For: Young Blaze

Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray
Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays

NICE OPENER AND WORDPLAY...

U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows
Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes

MEH, WAS OK.


U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G
Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's

BEST PUNCH, NICE WORDPLAY AND NAMEPLAY...

U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers
Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers

WAS OK....

Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True
Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu...

NICE CLOSER....

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you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence...
Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance..

NOT HARD HITTING, BUT OK OPENER...

Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments...
Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments...

NICE PUNCH, GOOD WORDPLAY.

I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you..
Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you..

NICE CONCEPT, BUT I DONT THINK YOU WORDED IT TO PERFECTION.

Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already...
4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..**

NICE PERSONAL PUNCH...

Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry..
Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.***

NOT FEELIN IT REALLY

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YOUNG GETS MAH VOTE AS HE HAD THE HARDER HITTIN PUNCHES AND WAS MORE CONSISTANT THROUGHOUT, BOTH HAD DECENT WORDPLAY AND NICE FLOW THROUGHOUT.

NO HATE,
RTF BLAZE.

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