Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

Chi- Your verse needs elevation, your punches was weak the flow was ok, but the structure needs help. Try to lengthen your lines the same....Uh you didn't have any personals nor punches....nothing special in your verse dawg just plain too basic..

Lyricalmastermind- Nice man, you had a nice verse, good punches with some decent wordplays. I suggest to you to use some more personals dawg and flipping them into a wordplay and a punch, but this verse was good yo nice.


Overall=This battle is one-sided, i vote for lyricalmastermind because he had better punches, better wordplays. His punches were effective. Chi your punches was all basic, non-effective, it needs to be better wording and your structure just fucked up the flow of reading, sorry man you need elevation...work on punches and structure...1

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