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Old 06-02-05, 09:51 PM   #25
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Voted For: ~Babylon~

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192634
^^^ return the vote
marv-
dis fag stay frontin i cant stand it,admit u aint damm sick.
"babylon"'s my son but he was mistake me & his moms aint "PLaN-it".*
^^^sayin u have sex with someones mother... i would say just might be played out... not feelin
ya punches dont land bitch!,u gon be da next youngin i might merk.
i ask em 4 a 'pink slip' he said nah i only wear dos unda my white skirt.
^^dont like
yes i flow sicka than u!..but u aint neva load clipps in da tool.
he cant get a girl "wet" so he pulls out his dick then "throw a bitch in da pool".
^^^sexual punch... not very good
dis kid a fool...thinkin goin at marv dat he really a win.
babylon dont 'drive car's' he just "the parker" like "nicky & kim".
^^^so the punch is saying he doesn't drive cars? not good
did i try hard? hell no merkin dis dumb ass fukk was easy.
babylon u prove dat there's more "fags in jersey" then "governer mc grevy"**
^^finisher was a gay punch? not good
not feelin ya verse at all, your punches weren't hard hittin at all.

marv-
u'r a member, I'm a CS legend, never put yourself a head of me
your temperary "an underdog on top" I'm a syndicated legacy
^^ self glorification... not feelin
u tried to challenge the whole site, tried to fuck the community
but thats ya "birth" right, cuz ya mom showed the same inginuity
^^momma joke played, but decen't flip
"amerikaz nightmare", sorry but thats just obsean couzin
someone being scared of marv? Ha! I wouldnt dream of it
^^good punch, liked this
at least queens aint got global warming, cuz the climate aint right
cuz your shit use 2 be hot, now its more of a mid summers night
^^ don't relly like this... dont like leading into punches with the first line like that... and not a hard punch
marv thought he'd run through me, but his conditionings missing
cause its turning out to be more like a fast type of skipping
^^^kinda s/g... not really likin it either,

vote- bab- cuz...
"amerikaz nightmare", sorry but thats just obsean couzin
someone being scared of marv? Ha! I wouldnt dream of it
^^^ this is the only line that was an actual original and witty line and not played concept.

return with a vote on my battle PLEASE... its gettin slept on mad.
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