Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Dolla
your verse was weak i wasn't feeling anything really about it to be honest with you um flow wasn't to bad your your stucture wasn't to bad but the thing that i thought that really was weak was your punchlines they just dont hit one little bit work on creativty play with words some more and keep elevating 1

Barz
um much better verse from you hands down much more flawless verse from you the stucture was pretty good and the flow was very well done your punchlines were what really made me think of you winning this like just a lot more complex and more of a vet at writing punchlines and shit. keep elevating though you could still work its good though 1

v/ Barz Of Steel

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