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Old 06-02-05, 10:21 PM   #17
M&rk
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Voted For: Anamosity

I'll Leave This Kid Laying Around..........Like His Sig, Call Him A Circle
^^liked, but not very hard hitting
This Faggot Couldn't Drop A Tight Verse If You Came With A Ratchet
^^just decent
This Kid's RapVerse Career Aint Going No Where..........Just Face-It-Fairy*
Your Flow Is Like An Parked Car Running...............It Remains Stationary
^^be better if u said his career... but decent concept

rev-

Battling everyone on RV, yet your record is 1-0, guess you almost had it,
Left ya broken and pathetic just like how ya girl did.
^^dencet wordplay and punch, but a lil self glorification, and i hate that shit.

vote-wall for more lines that i felt...

return the favor...link...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192634
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