Ah nice dawg. Imaginary was good in this piece, the emotion needs to be upp a little. Work on your vocab. You had some meta's like comparing flanders and shit. But the only thing that stood out in your verse was imaginary.....I really like this because it's different and you approach it different.

Yo maybe we can callab sometimes...holla.

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