OOOOOOOOOOOOO this is good poem here. Alright i like your approach in this, The concept was nice. Uppp on the vocab. The imaginary of this piece was good, the emotion of this piece was also good. The best aspect in this poem was the concept and the approach you took. I had to re-read it to get the concept but i got it. This is a good poem no doubt.

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