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Old 06-03-05, 10:15 AM   #4
Dervla
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Even though Spoken Word Bond no showed, I'm still going to say somethin about your poem...

That was raw, even though it was short, but it had alot of stuff in it. The emotion was good dawg, you showed your feelings of how you felt when your friend wasn't even a friend to you. The imaginary was nice, picture very perfect. The approach you took was good also, and the concept you put down was good. I only just wish you can write more.

Can you please return a favor...Leave a feedback in my newest OM "The monster Within"....thanx
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