This was a good solid piece... aint really peeped your work in awhile......You had some good emotion for the most part.... some seemed forced in places but other then that your emotion was solid ...some parts seemed somewhat forced emotionally....structure was good.... you had some good strong vocab for the most part......wasnt the best piece i have seen from you but i see that you are still working on some things and trying to elevate and thats a good thing... keep doin what you doing man...