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Old 06-03-05, 11:50 AM   #15
Dervla
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Voted For: Kein Witz

Kein Witz- UH dawg....Your punches was played, and they were whack,non effective. The way you worded your set up punch, was whack also. The flow was alright in most parts, the best aspect of your verse was just the flow and the only good punch you had was...........

Dizzee Rascal couldn't raise the roof....if he was fucking Hurricane Francis.
Just like Rascal was playing monopoly, Dizzee is taking his chances. **

But everything else was BLAH!



Dizz- uh dawg. That was whack, no punches, no flow. Actually your whole verse was just plain nothing, you need to elevate on structure and flow........also punches. This was just plain whack, yo elevate.

Overall=This battle was whack, both heads needs to work on punches.......and personals with decent flow. Uh my vote goes to Kein Wtiz, He actually had a punch, most of them was played out..just plain blah! Dizz you came pure whackness man your punches wasn't even touching, sorry but you need to elevate.
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