Voted For: mizz fyre

Mizz fyre- Uh ok. You had great imaginary. the flow of it was some-what poetic. The emotion you had in this verse was average, i say put more feelings to it. The concept you approach in this verse was good. I just say put more feelings to it, nice imaginary though.

Ghost- alright, ok for a first topical. The best aspect from your verse was imaginary, but the imaginary wasn't great nor weak just average. I didnt feel no emotion from your verse, nah nothing. You need to upp on your vocab (you too mizz fyre), but it was ok for a first, just need to work on imaginary and emotion.


Overall=This was kinda like an one-sided battle, I'mma have to vote on mizz fyre because she came good with a nice approach. Her imaginary and emotion just won it in this battle. Ghost your verse was ok for a first but it didnt have that "better" imaginary, your emotion is what's lacking in your topical verse, so i vote for mizz fyre for better imaginary and emotion (elevate on that part)............1

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