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Old 06-03-05, 01:35 PM   #21
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Voted For: White Powder

first young blaze....blaaaaoooooooo

Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray
Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays
pretty played...but was a punch
U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows
Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes
i liked the word play in this line
U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G
Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's
this was ok i dont like the whole G thing 2nd
lines was ok simple wordplay
U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers
Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers
meh, i didnt like it, i never like lines that have gun shot
stab, or some hood type punch in it
Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True
Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu...
meh, its blah blah
(W)hite Powde(R)
^^^sit.......back on Psa Bench.
overall an ok verse, you had some wordplay most of
it was simple punches were ok nothing great, i would say keep elevating and get better and work on
incorperating personals into your punches more.

WP, CRACKA

you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence...
Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance..
multis, too bad i dont vote on multis, ok punch here
Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments...
Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments...
lmao, i liked this line here nice wordplay on both lines
prob dopest punch of the battle so far
I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you..
Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you..
again nice wordplay, took some thought? ight-good punch
Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already...
4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..**
lol, i'm liking this wordplay ok punch though
Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry..
Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.***
lol, an ight punch, nice wordplay

you had some nice wordplay alot more complex then
blaze's i think, you had a couple of punches that
took the battle for you, although i have to say i have seen better ight battle though...lol three stooges

V/White Powder
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