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Old 06-03-05, 02:36 PM   #21
veyetal
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Voted For: One M.B.

yes, i definately think OMB took this one.

khaoz: you came out with personals, which is good, but they were weak and poorly worded, so they weren't that good at all. the punches you attempted, were very poor, i've actually read alot better from you. nothing really stood out here at all, just work on creativeness and wordplay, because you had decent concepts, just did not pack anything to back up the punch. keep up though.

OMB: pretty nice verse, yes, not really any personals, but the punches made up for them. creative, witty, and flowed perfect. a little self-glor though, but meh, was not that big of deal, you still owned in this one.

v/OMB, for harder punches. rtf.
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