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Very Nice Fams...
Only Thing To Be Carefull About Is Your Content...
Like The First Line What Kinda Iffy...
Looked Like You Just Wanted A Nice Flow...
Wich Was Accomplished But The Content Was Sort Of A Stretch...
But Very Nice Imagery And Metaphorical Speach...
Very Nice, Glad Have You With Us Over On C.S. Fams...
Stay Up And Keep Writing...
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