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I Liked This Suprisingly...
When I Read The First 2 Bars I Wasnt Impressed...
But It Really Picked Up And Saved The Piece Near The Middle And End...
Didnt Really Have Any Imagry But The Emotion Was Pretty Good...
And I Liked Your Flow, It Always Caught Up Nice At The End Of Each Line...
Only Critisism...
Maybe Tryn Make An Actual Storyline Next Time...
Just Cuz This Topic Has Been Done...
So Tryn Think Of A Story That Something Like This Plays Into...
The Reader Will Enjoy That Much More...
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