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IP:
Its Reeeeeeeaaaaaally Simple...
And Although It Was Real, It Been Done So Many Times...
At Times Your Lines Didnt Rhyme At All...
Sometimes That Doesnt Really Matter If You Have Internal Rhyming...
But Since You Didnt The Lack Of A Fallow Up Line Was Really Apparent...
I Wasnt Really Feeling This Though...
But Keep At It And Keep Elevating...
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