Thread: Acuity vs Calm
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Old 06-03-05, 02:36 PM   #23
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Voted For: Acuity

Calm- came kinda unprepared, cuz yo poem was on the basic edge, missed emotions and transitions to make yo flow smoother. but imagery was ok

Ac- well i this was interestin no need to use words that u dont kno the meanin of..lol or cant pronounce big vocab is ok but imagery and emotions was felt nice..it has kinda catchy story...but overall u had this.

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