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IP:
Voted For: Stanza
Stanza You Got Lucky That Han Lacked A Storyline...
Aiight Its Like This...
Stanza Had Consistant Flow, Good Emotion And Imagry...
Also What Won This For Him Was The Storyline...
Han Completely Lacked Something To Fallow Along With...
And Althought It Had Amazing Vocab, Imagry And Flow Was Straight...
You've GOT To Have A Storyline, Its A Topical...
That Is The Point Of Topical Writing...
Pretty Good Battle Though...
Han Just Work On Your Storylines And Concepts...
Then You Could Be Great...
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