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IP:
This def a nice read
OSB:
Proving I'm right, obscure brightness isn't a viewable light,
Like sun off a glacier, moving sluggishly but a beautiful site,
Beautiful simile + visual
Soooth flow some subtle multis that def helped it flow smoooth
Drakel
i know im not perfect, but every new stride i glide closer to the light
connect with the tide, taking notes while listening to the ocean recite
Nice way to finish ur verse
Also some nice flow
Overall an enjoyable read . respect
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