Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
this cats so wack that he had to cook stu and use black magik
to create barz of steel because he never before had em *1
Ok personal
you think you 'raw'? then im choppin you up like my names 'butch'
my verses are on 'fire' ! your 'godly' ?....................
......well if i sat you on my notepad id bet weed see a 'burning bush' *2
Decent
im 'burning this fag' like a straight 'cooking piece of cake'
'barz of steel' with the 'blueprint' shit he 'aint got it made' *3
Nice
like owning 'a scarce penny' steel must not have 'common sense'
stepping to me with that? your crap admit it..............
...................even gave yourself credit to boost your confidence *4
Ok
im not hell raiser but yet i use pens (pins) to raise hell
its a shame he became 'barz of steel' just to have 'cells' (sales)
Bit forced decent
your 'flows about to be killed' cuz this is 'the last straw'
could never be 'raisin' chaos at all........
......like the attempts to lift a 'breast from grandmas' *5
lollololol
this dude is 'shit' so stop 'sitting' around cuz im 'sending him in'
battlin his alias's is the only time he can get a win
Str8
hes astounded by my talent i got him branded with a loss for words *6
homie only has 'fake steel' and how you black magik...........
..........when you whiter than a jackson accident gon worse *7
Theres nothing wrong with being white uve even got a white man in ur sig
VS
Ya rhymes is weak, please, don't try and fight with me
I'll throw ya "face to the curb", make you "bite the streets"
Sure i said this in a cypher lol nice
I like to beef, My nine'll close his eyes with ease
Or I'll clap five, in this wack guy, til his ass lies deceased
Filler
Look kid, all ya shit is played....................................
because the only time you dealing with "heavy barz"
...............................................is when u "liftin weights"
Str8
Ya text is weak, quit testin me, you're better? Please....
I stay "above u".....................................like the "letter T"
PLLLAYED
So I doubt you will win, I'm sorry to have to clown on this kid
But this dude's 14 years old and still sounds like he's 10!!!!!!! *
Ok personal
You're clashin with hell, I'll 'tear your ass' like 'bein smacked w/ a belt
Plus the "only time you could get a win is if you battle yourself! *
erm str8 sure he sed same ting
This kid's a bitch, everything you create with a pen is shit
Come on man, I've seen better "(w)rappers" on "Christmas gifts"
Played
I'm sick with rhymes, so kid, you can't win this fight...........
Because ya "style has been played ever since your inventor died!!!" **
Tight
Punches = BoS
Personals - Both
Metaphors/similes = Both
Flow = BoS
Amusement = both
Overall = BoS
Please return the favour in my sig
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