Voted For: One M.B.

Alright i think One Man Band got this shit here... heres how imma break it down... IM NOT INCLUDING THE VERSES.. JUST THE EXPLANATIONS THAT CORRESPOND TO THE BAR.

OMB
1. Nice line... i would have changed the first part of it though, but the 2nd line of the bar was put together nicely... 7/10
2. Haha.. last line was good... first line has nice multis... 8/10
3. Good line.... if yeh dont get it.. badminton = not played with a ball.... 8/10
4. It's waldo... but i could see the intention. 6/10
5. Not bad line.. a good punch i must say.. hit nice 8/10
6. Played bar man.. phatter & puking... played a lot.. 4/10
7. hahaha nice line.. worded kinda weird.. but works.. 6/10
8. eh... not really feelin it much.. but it works..... 6/10
9. if this is ur closer.. it didnt hit as hard as i expected... but works with ur entire verse.. 7/10

1. Not feelin the line....kinda personal.. but really didnt hit that hard to me.. 7/10
2. Just no... first of all 2 5 cent coins does not make a dime.. it makes 10 cents.. not the actual dime coin.. therefore it just went downhill from there... wording was messed on this line... 5/10
3. Urrm not feelin it 100%... i see the concept but the working just didnt work for me.. like i know what ur doin but it just wasnt thrown together properly 6/10
4. Doesnt work.. punch doesnt hit hard because OMB has elevated.. and his tutorial is good... soo if it was a personal.. its not hittin hard.. 6/10
5. Not bad.. not amazing like WHOA but it works in the verse... overall id give it a 8/10
6. Ummm.... not feelin it.. sharks with no fins... come on man.... 5/10
7. wordplay is ummm okay.. not as good as what i would expect from wordplay... work on that 7/10
8. Not bad.. worked with the multis etc.. overall its only worth a 7/10.. nothin really whoa to it
9. Closer was aight... nothin special.. wasnt feelin it much.. same liek OMB.. not feelin it..

Overall OMB is takin this.. his flow was nicer, he had nice multis and nice punched... Yeah Khaoz had some personals.. they werent hitting hard.. work on that man....

vote - OMB..


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^^^ Don't be gay and hate because i may have voted against you.. i gave you good imput on the battle.. its just my opinions... good luck...