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Old 06-03-05, 07:21 PM   #27
Daubs
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Voted For: sabre

dope battle.....both verses were nice and packed with punches.


ak

this was some nice shit man, personald were dope. that opener summed up the whole verse, dope concept nice punch and personal, your verse also flowed nicely but i suggest using multies.

barz
your shit was hella tite too man, had nice wordplay but you used too many played concepts...like the joker bar, oldest wordplay going imo, i think you came weak to your standards so due to better personals and herder hittin punches, ak gets mah vote.
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