Voted For: Paranoid

hmmm this wasn't the best.. but an okay battle.

mizz fyre: verse was okay. but like.. iono.. just wasn't really feeling it.. like espeically in ur first 2 lines.. like the flow to me really seemed sorta off.. and flow is important so the reader can image ur lyrics n understand it without being paused by the lack of flow.. also your vocab didn't seem to be good enough.. vocab is important because it can explain more with one word.. and make better imagery n emotion.. overall.. pretty nice verse...


paranoid.. your flow as well isnt perfect.. but still sort of off.. iono y but maybe now for rv heads its hard to have a nice flow.. well neway.. your vocab was very much on point.. n explained more and really had a much better story line.. your sorta got the emotion.. but you didn't provide enough imagery.. that too is important.. well just because you had better vocab and a better story line..

i vote: Para

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