I enjoyed reading this poem because of the serene vibe that I felt, mainly caused by the quite simple vocab. But this isn't negative at all, I think that big vocab would've just ruined the entire piece. The imagery could be found in the first part, the strong emotion in the second half. I like how those two gently came together, the last part was packed with emotion especially the alst three lines...

For if you cannot save my life
Please,
Save my Soul

Excellent, I am fan of your writing style without a doubt!

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