Yo i like this piece.Real sentimental fo real. Any nigga can talk about how hot they are, how many chicks they got or how badly they'll beat a motherfucker, but it takes real heart to rhyme about something deep like this. And for that i give you props g.

High ratings for content. structure was kinda simple but i guess it was sacrificed for content. the flow was real good, it was easy to read and get into the flow of this piece.
Vocab was reasonable but its all good as it seems to me you was just tryna get straight to the point with what you was sayin.

Keep goin g.

RTF on the open mic pieces in my sig