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Old 06-04-05, 02:33 PM   #20
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Voted For: King Solo

Word word solo..

SOLO

1. hahah nice personal and punch man it worked well as a bar.. 9/10
2. Shit.. another hard punch and personal.. 9/10
3. Not as hard as others though still good with the nameplay and personal.. 8/10
4. nice punch... worked well 8/10
5. hahah nice punch.. and semi-personal... solo's just rippin this 8/10
6. OOO shit haha nice closer.. 9/10

50 Bars

1. weak opener.. all .com rhymes are played.. 6/10
2. not feelin it.. boards... board... just not feelin the line.. prolly with the wording.. 6/10
3. not a bad punch.. not hard hard.. but good.. 7/10
4. not feelin it.. you shoulda thrown more of a punch in the first line.. seemed like filler... 7/10
5. ehhh so so line...nothin personal there.. just a punch.. not feelin it fully.... 7/10

Overall Solo got this battle.. he had personals in almost every line.. and his punches were good.. 50 bars.. just work on the punches.. you'll get better at em.. think of more complex shit.. not basic stuff...


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Word... Its White Powder btw...
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