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Old 06-04-05, 02:39 PM   #14
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Voted For: GKillaz05

GKILLZ
1. Nice opener.. little basic but hits nice 8/10
2. Not a bad punch.. toilet line was good... little played but good 8/10
3. not bad.. still basic.. work on your complexity.. 7/10
4. nice closer.. no really hard punch.. but it'll do.. 7/10

Sask
1. nice opener... little played though... 8/10
2. alright punch... worked with the wp a little.. 7/10
3. last line was good.. but the first line.. straight filler.. 6/10
4. not feelin it.. + filler again with the self glorification 5/10

overal Killaz got this. with better punches.. and overall less filler....
both of you work on ur shit though.. it was a good battle..

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