Originally Posted by SPuL aka Reckless

steppin up my game my mind is elevated
gonna stay that way
im forever contemplating
new ways to run all these bitches out
im not scared to let it be known
i knock a nigga out

^aiight this is how you wrote it, right?

try it like this:
steppin up my game my mind is elevated
gonna stay that way, im forever contemplating
new ways to run all these bitches out
im not scared to let it be known,i knock a nigga out


Like when you rhyme you're like (letters stand for the end word of each line. If they the same letter, it means it rhymes):

xxxxx-xxxxxA
xxxxB
xxxxA

Try for:

xxxxx-xxxxxA
xxxxx-xxxxxA



^like try for that. HArd to explain, but you get the jist of it?