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IP:
I Really Enjoyed Your Content...
Very Nice Emotion And Imagry...
The Structure Was Easy To Fallow And Such...
Only Thing About This Piece Was It Was More Like Poetry...
Because It Really Didnt Have A Rap Flow...
It Was More Like One Sylable Rhymes And Such...
So Ya, Just Working On Your Rhyme Schemes...
Stay Up And Keep Writing Kid...
You Look Like A Very Promising Writer...
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