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IP:
This Piece Had Very Nice Emotion...
It Lacked Alot Of Things But Emotion You Had On Point...
And Even Though You Lacked So Many Things I Kind Of Enjoyed This Piece...
But It Was Very Simplistic...
Maybe That Is Even Why I Liked It...
I Dunno, I Cant Even Tell You Cuz Im Not Sure Why I Enjoyed This...
But Ya, Maybe Next Time Tryn Expand And Increase Your Rhyming...
Stay Up And Keep Writing...
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