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Old 06-04-05, 07:06 PM   #15
Triple_N
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yea I'm ahave to agree wit engmya on this one sounding fake....I know what is..bout y'al nigga y'all ain't holding shit....an on top of that u don't even play that part right..if u ain't really hard u gott aleast play the part right...jus realness yall...soc had nice lines but all ya gun references sounding like a niggas dat been listening to rap gat lines alot instead of a nigga dats actually held one...aside from the genericness of this track it was alot better than I expected..soc's quality is better his flkow is better an delievry is better...not great in any yet but u def good now....u stumbled on a few words tho...still gotta shorten lines a lil so u cna fully pronounce words....pop...dam son ya voice is mad yound sounding....u sound like 13 or 14 dats botu what u is anyways...that what made ya spit so much more fake sounding....u don't sound gully at you...ya lacked emotion like everyoen else said..ya flow was decent u was stumbling on words too....an vocals was a tad low....lyrics I didn't find impression u sounded like the new breed of young niggas spitting they blast alot of dipset & cass..not an original approach but u youn gu got time to develop...I liked beat an the sample on beat was tight..overal not a bad track 6/10....stay up y'all hope this helped..no hate jus realness.......1
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