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Old 06-04-05, 10:00 PM   #3
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Yo this was a very thougt provoking poem...The topic has kin of been done before, but not with this type of spin on it. The emotion in this piece was definitely there as DQ stated.

I speak in hope that you will listen
I not once went to church
Not once clenched my hands
To talk to you
Never believed
Until now

^^ Emotion...

Look forward to reading some more of your drops

RTF on my Poem First Love...please
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