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Old 06-04-05, 10:03 PM   #2
.Barz Of Steel.
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Wuddup man...

Havent seen you in a little minute on RV

But this was a pretty decent piece. Pretty good imagery and emotion. Vocab could've been upped a little, but overall, it was fine.

Nice piece
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