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Old 06-04-05, 10:59 PM   #16
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Voted For: {Propain}

Wow, very close battle here fellas...

Propain:

..Kids afraid to show his face, you scared to Step Ya Hoe...
...Cuz in this battle there will be no sign of snow like weather in Mexico..!

Nice, 9/10

..This is ya last day on earth, every second leave Tomorrow Darkening..
...And you couldnt bring The Heat to the net if ya name was Charles Barkley..!

LOL, nice...8/10

..I am immortal, but this other human Being Aint Ammounting..
...As Im dropping tracks on Snow like Skeing In The Mountains..!

LOL, Nice again...9/10

..Cant get a bitch so he sucks dicks, this kid really Blows Yall...
...Cuz friskey winter girls the only time females handling Snow Balls..!

LMFAO...10/10

..Dude is easily melted from heat, so without effort Ill Decline This Whore..
...Cuz Im always serving pain to this kid while redefining Dine-A-Soar..!

Nice closer...8/10

Overall: 44/50 (88%)

Very nice verse. Nice wordplay and all your punches connected.

Snow:


'Pain's Raw??', Not even If I cut you N 'Squashed the Beef'
Slice this Warm Blooded herb wit chainsaws, thas the only time U 'Droppin Heat!..'

Good, 7/10

And You Can't Go Along with Beef, like a Malt that Freezed
Much Less Swallow Beef, cus I punch out ya grill like Obie, 'Got Some Teeth!?'

LOL, a bit played, but nice...8/10

No you Aint Snow, n Not Rain, but you wanna Be Ill
But See, Im Known to Stop Pain, like Morpheine Pills

Good, 9/10

Can See Your Losin, So C'mon..Play the Game
Dont U Know?, Comedy Movies is the Only Time You're 'Major, Pain'

Decent, 7/10

Watch as you Come Short wit 'Stretched Punches' N Played Flows
You Cant Win, Cus me bringin Fire's the only way Propain Blows

Dope finisher, 9/10

Overall: 40/50 (80%)

As you can see, this shit came out close, but Propain had it. His punches were more consistent and were all creative and original. Snow your verse was nice, but you had 1 or 2 played concepts in there that did it for you man.

V/ {Propain}
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