Voted For: PreZidict

dont act stupid like ya name, this "cat burns" since his pussies propain
dis dickbrain, musta lost a rape battle n was forced 2 change his name
^^decent
nigga why even come 2 dis site, 2 get ya "pussy ate" like "starvin dikes"
cause i could swallow ya hype, n leave ya ass-high like you fartin-kites
^^umm...kinda decent I guess
last time he got merked he cried, so im changin his Ls like smokin dye *
wateva he says a lie, fuck undeveloped kids like premature pedophiles
^^played out concept
pretend u dead be4 u die, faggit hungry 4 cock...u da biggest dick alive!
matter fact....he'd lose his "virginity 2 bobby" just 2 smoke wit his bride! **
^^ur best line
i dont need 2 kill a nigga
................who busts in his mouth 2 protect his kids from otha guys!
^^weak closer

Conclusion-Ur verse needs more personals in it.Ur metas was ncie.Compared to 85 percecnt of the other garbage on this site...ur ahit was good.Flow was off at pionts though,


Fuck with me? Ill cock back and Slap Glutton..
...Cuz I got Prez on lock just like the Caps Button..!
^^nah..too simple
..Just got here and already a vet, Ill Spank A Newbie
...And leave ya Dead Prez like old Gangsta Movies..!
^nah...again too simple
..Ram Ya! Leave you inprinted on the cement when I Stamp Ya..
...As I trash you in a flash like throwaway Cameras..!
^^OK
..I come explosive! Bring heat to ya street thats Dynamo..
..And Ill leave prints on ya organs and I aint talking about Pianos..
^^decent
..Blood trinkling down ya cheek as I turn ya Face Red..
...Cuz Ill fucking Crack-Idict like despreate BaseHeads..!
^^ur best line

Conclusion-Simplicity defined ur verse completely.Need metas and wordplays.Had some decent sim's but metas are always better.

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