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Old 06-05-05, 12:30 AM   #13
{Propain}
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Voted For: CeleriTy

This was a good battle. Both stayed on topic and followed the concept good all the way through. I was feeling both verses on emotion..good shit here to both of you guys. Im not going to do a complete verse breakdown because there really isnt a point for that in a topical but I will explain..

Celerity had some good shit and so did line. Both stayed on topic and keep the emotion strong throughtout their entire verses. Line had some good quoteables..

We're unreal to extraterrestial beings of fate and fortune,
Who paint portraits of contextual thoughts and corpses.

That was nice. It flowed well and the emotion was good here. Nice shit and mos def a good way to open ya verse.

Celerity also had some good bars that deserved to be quoted..

A gentle screening, but now and proud, the mask is released
For the sadistic hunt, as my victim runs, I attack for the feast

This was really dope. It followed topic really good and was strong with emotion in both lines.
The rhyme scheme here was also nice. Good shit here and nice creativity.

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Overall, Id have to say that Celerity won this. He was more complex and he was just more creative throughout his entire verse. Both came well though and stayed on topic. Good job bpth and stay up.

Vote- celerity
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