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Old 06-05-05, 12:59 AM   #12
Dervla
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Voted For: {Propain}

Pro- Nice wordplays with punches. The flow was nice, and the line about "dead prez" was good creativity. Had a personal in there. Can say much about this verse, the best aspect was the wordplays and your punches.

prez- In my eyes you have fallen, I've seen your battles and you usually come harder than this. Alright you had good wordplays but the punches meh they wasn't hard in my eyes, and the gay punch are played, if you word them differently then maybe a gay punch came be effective, but nah this one.

Overall= This battle was alright, Propain gets my vote for harder punches w/ wordplays. Prez, you've fallen what happen?...Ahh mane I didnt give you a vote because the punches wasn't harder, more like it was played The gay jokes and the part when you said "starvin dyes" been said and done, but word differently, the rest was coo, with high vocab, but man still most of your punches was played...so my vote goes to Propain
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