o.k....two really nice drops here and a real nice battle so good job to both........

Cali- you used nice imagery in your drop....it had depth and originality and that was good....emotion was nice to but your structure i felt let this drop down and as a result the flow was slightly off.......i liked the way the opening few lines really captured the readers attention and made you wanna read on....very good

Artistica- powerful imagery in your drop and emotion......i loved the way that you portarayed how the mother was feeling....and your emotion was nice in this part.....your drop was very creative and your vocab was a ballance of complex and simple.....your structure was on point and consistent throughout.....

vote- artistica.....for creativity, enjoyment and structure..........

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